Renay ([info]heyheyrenay) wrote in [info]ff_100,

FFX: Strawberry - Heart-Shaped (Chappu/Lulu)

Title: Heart-Shaped
Fandom: Final Fantasy X
Theme: Strawberry
Characters/Pairings: Chappu/Lulu
Rating: G
Word Count: 297 / 300 / 307 (depending on what I used—I am not counting, I am lazy. XD)
Notes: Thanks to [info]lassarina for the awesome idea. ♥




"Look."

Lulu stared down into an pile of red fruit, the green leaves a shock against the rich color. Chappu's hand was full of them, small but plump. One leaked between his fingers, almost dropping before he caught it in his other palm. He grinned at her, the playful twist to his mouth making her want to laugh.

"What are these?" She took one, but didn't bite into it. Chappu wasn't cruel, but he didn't mind pranks. "I remember the last food surprise you gave to Wakka."

"Aw, Lu, I wouldn't, not to you." Chappu rubbed his head. "It only numbed his mouth for an hour; he had it coming for nagging me." The crowds from the stadium were spilling out for halftime, nudging at her like waves while Chappu was stock still, bright-ripe berries still and serene in his hand. "Come on, try it. It's good."

She did so; the tart flavor spreaded through her mouth. She had never had this fruit before; she would have remembered. "Where did you get this?"

"There's a booth back there. The Al Bhed grow them." Lulu should have known; of course if it was Al Bhed it wouldn't be widespread, no matter how good it was. And it was very good. She finished the berry she had and licked her finger, smiling when Chappu's face flushed.

"How long until the next half?" Lulu stepped closer, her skirt playing out a familiar tune, metal on metal. Another berry fell, and this time she caught it and lifted it to her lips. She touched her tongue to it, and this time Chappu laughed at her. He reached up to brush her cheek with his knuckles, warm and familiar.

"Time enough," he said, linked their free hands together and pulled her away from the crowd.

Tags: fandom: final fantasy x, week 030: ffx/strawberry

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[info]lassarina

July 8 2007, 05:22:32 UTC 4 years ago

EEEEEEEEEEEEE. *squeals at you, high-pitchedly* So cute. And mmmm, strawberries. ♥ YOU WINS. I like the way her skirt is playing a tune, and how Chappu's all like o_o; when she licks her fingers. XD

[info]heyheyrenay

July 8 2007, 21:01:23 UTC 4 years ago

The skirt = tune thing was also your idea, because of all your music talk. I was like, "Hmm!" Basically, you are like a magic charm. :D ♥

[info]owlmoose

July 8 2007, 06:58:23 UTC 4 years ago

I can only squeal along with [info]lassarina. Such a sweet moment, and funny too -- I can just see the brothers relating the way you described. Nicely done. :D

[info]heyheyrenay

July 8 2007, 21:03:09 UTC 4 years ago

:D Cue me trying to ram in characterization of three people plus set a scene in 300 words or less! I'm glad you liked it (and uh, I get really wibbly over Chappu/Wakka brotherly antics, because man, they're brothers and Wakka is a nag and! IT'S HEARTBREAKING, but I adore it. >>).

Thank you. ♥

[info]mneme_forgets

July 9 2007, 14:57:01 UTC 4 years ago

I like the playfulness of this couple. I enjoy Lulu's suspicion, but more telling is the way she immediately believes Chappu when he tells her it is not a trick. It's a depiction of real trust, the kind that doesn't apply to every single situation, but is there when it counts.

I enjoy Lulu's reaction to the new fruit.

You are so good at nuances. I really like the way in which Lulu's seductive play with the fruit works the way she wants it to the first time, but the second time provokes (kind, not mocking) laughter. Again, this is how it really works in a relationship. What's sexy once can be funny a second time. This is very sweet. :)

[info]heyheyrenay

July 20 2007, 19:55:51 UTC 4 years ago

Yay! I'm glad you liked this. ♥
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